TEXT 6 – Authors:
José Afonso and António Almeida (9ºA)
A Perfect
Ending
Before
leaving the refugee camp they decided to camp in the forest with
Tiara and her friends to finish their holidays the best way they
could.
One day at the Pandawas Academy they decided to buy tents at the
local market to camp with their friends. However, the night had
fallen so quickly that they had to prepare things in a hurry so that
they could call their friends and join together that same night.
Everything was arranged and they managed to gather round the fire
that night. Tiara and her fiends offered Jeremy and Rachel
traditional handmade Malaysian gifts.
Rachel and Jeremy loved the gifts and they said that they wouldn’t
forget that experience and adventure. Tiara and friends really
touched their hearts.
For Jeremy and Rachel, this was the best holiday ever.
3 comentários:
O melhor "perfect ending" para mim e este, porque não há coisa melhor do que mostrar carinho e amizade por aqueles que gostamos e que não nos são indiferentes...
No entanto nos "perfect ending" atrás não existe demonstração de carinho/afeto escrito ou referentes dos que estão no campo de refugiados pelos que se voluntariaram.
Por isso para mim este sem duvida e o melhor "perfect ending".
Ass: António de Almeida.
Para mim este é o final que se adequa mais com a história.
Ass: Vitor
Na minha opinião este é o final. Tem enumeras personagens e um final muito elaborado
José Afonso
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