quinta-feira, maio 12, 2016

A destination or a new beginning? Text 5

TEXT 5 – Authors: Flávio Azedo and Jéssica Carrasco (9ºA)

A Perfect Ending

During the way back home, after half na hour on the private jet of Jeremy’s dad, both friends were a little bit bored. Jeremy fell asleep but something goes wrong…
-Wake up, Jeremy! Said Rachel. The plane went off the track.
-What? I don’t believe it, dad, what’s going on? Asked Jeremy scared.
-Are you all OK? Shouted Jeremy’s dad.
-Yes, but where are we? Jeremy wanted to know.
-Don’t worry. The pilot was able to make a good landing and we are in an island called Sidapon – says dad- We have to stay here until help arrives, nearly a week. Until then, stay together and everything will be OK.
-But…Started Jeremy.
-But, nothing, Jeremy. We have to live here inside the plane. Answered dad.
-Luckily, the plane is alright. Said Rachel.
-And there is still food enough. Jeremy stated.
-Well, we’ll stay here today and tomorrow we’ll see. Dad said.
A week has flown by and the friends had to survive with the remaining food and water. But the worst of all was not having internet.
-Finally the helicopter arrived! Shouted Jeremy.
-We’re safe. Smiled Rachel.
-Boys hurry up! Ordered dad.

Another great experience has passed and after that they’ll never see things in exactly the same light as they did before.

3 comentários:

Anónimo disse...

Na minha opinião este "perfect ending" é o melhor, pois, o enredo cativa muito os seus leitores. Tem algo de especial em relação aos outros, tem aventura e um bocado de comédia em relação à linguagem dos jovens e também as diferentes maneiras como cada um reage à chegada do helicóptero: por exemplo o Jeremy reage de forma impaciente, e a Rachel de uma forma muito alegre tendo em conta o tempo em que eles estiveram naquela ilha.

André Oliveira

Flávio Azedo disse...

Na minha opinião este "perfect ending" esta muito bom, pois joga com algum sarcasmo, para além do mais o enredo está adequado e divertido, sendo a parte que mais gosto quando no texto se refere que "o pior foi não haver internet".

Anónimo disse...

A meu ver achei, este "perfect ending" interessante por que tem criatividades interessantes,(aventuras) dando assim mais impacto a maneira de acaba final da historia.

Ana Valadas