quinta-feira, maio 12, 2016

A destination or a new beginning? text 6

TEXT 6 – Authors: José Afonso and António Almeida (9ºA)

A Perfect Ending

Before leaving the refugee camp they decided to camp in the forest with Tiara and her friends to finish their holidays the best way they could.
One day at the Pandawas Academy they decided to buy tents at the local market to camp with their friends. However, the night had fallen so quickly that they had to prepare things in a hurry so that they could call their friends and join together that same night.
Everything was arranged and they managed to gather round the fire that night. Tiara and her fiends offered Jeremy and Rachel traditional handmade Malaysian gifts.
Rachel and Jeremy loved the gifts and they said that they wouldn’t forget that experience and adventure. Tiara and friends really touched their hearts.

For Jeremy and Rachel, this was the best holiday ever.

3 comentários:

António Almeida disse...

O melhor "perfect ending" para mim e este, porque não há coisa melhor do que mostrar carinho e amizade por aqueles que gostamos e que não nos são indiferentes...
No entanto nos "perfect ending" atrás não existe demonstração de carinho/afeto escrito ou referentes dos que estão no campo de refugiados pelos que se voluntariaram.
Por isso para mim este sem duvida e o melhor "perfect ending".
Ass: António de Almeida.

Anónimo disse...

Para mim este é o final que se adequa mais com a história.
Ass: Vitor

Anónimo disse...

Na minha opinião este é o final. Tem enumeras personagens e um final muito elaborado
José Afonso