TEXT 5 – Authors:
Flávio Azedo and Jéssica Carrasco (9ºA)
A Perfect Ending
During
the way back home, after half na hour on the private jet of Jeremy’s
dad, both friends were a little bit bored. Jeremy fell asleep but
something goes wrong…
-Wake
up, Jeremy! Said Rachel. The plane went off the track.
-What?
I don’t believe it, dad, what’s going on? Asked Jeremy scared.
-Are you all
OK? Shouted Jeremy’s dad.
-Yes, but
where are we? Jeremy wanted to know.
-Don’t
worry. The pilot was able to make a good landing and we are in an
island called Sidapon – says dad- We have to stay here until help
arrives, nearly a week. Until then, stay together and everything will
be OK.
-But…Started
Jeremy.
-But,
nothing, Jeremy. We have to live here inside the plane. Answered dad.
-Luckily,
the plane is alright. Said Rachel.
-And there
is still food enough. Jeremy stated.
-Well, we’ll
stay here today and tomorrow we’ll see. Dad said.
A week has
flown by and the friends had to survive with the remaining food and
water. But the worst of all was not having internet.
-Finally the
helicopter arrived! Shouted Jeremy.
-We’re
safe. Smiled Rachel.
-Boys hurry
up! Ordered dad.
Another great experience has passed and after that they’ll never
see things in exactly the same light as they did before.
Na minha opinião este "perfect ending" é o melhor, pois, o enredo cativa muito os seus leitores. Tem algo de especial em relação aos outros, tem aventura e um bocado de comédia em relação à linguagem dos jovens e também as diferentes maneiras como cada um reage à chegada do helicóptero: por exemplo o Jeremy reage de forma impaciente, e a Rachel de uma forma muito alegre tendo em conta o tempo em que eles estiveram naquela ilha.
ResponderEliminarAndré Oliveira
Na minha opinião este "perfect ending" esta muito bom, pois joga com algum sarcasmo, para além do mais o enredo está adequado e divertido, sendo a parte que mais gosto quando no texto se refere que "o pior foi não haver internet".
ResponderEliminarA meu ver achei, este "perfect ending" interessante por que tem criatividades interessantes,(aventuras) dando assim mais impacto a maneira de acaba final da historia.
ResponderEliminarAna Valadas